The Official Writing Challenge
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Nicely done, good story. I really felt the MC's integrity being compromised with the "advancement of technology" - I enjoyed it.

God Bless~
Beautiful. . . you never know what a person is like until you really get to know them. The ending isn't what I expected, but very thought-provoking.
Wow! I really enjoyed this. I didn'[t understand all of the jargon but the wisdom from Neil seeped through the monitor into my head. Great writing. I can't think of any red ink at all. Congratulations on your EC!
Congratulations on making the EC list with this authentic piece of writing. I was happy for Neil to be recognized for what he knew, and was sad in a way for the arrogant and judgmental MC. Thanks for a good read.