The Official Writing Challenge
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02/02/12
This was an interesting piece packed with a lot of information.

In some places I wasn't sure if the many facts that were presented came together in a way that supported the challnege topic. Some of them seemed to jump around a little.

However, I loved the example all of us inteh church being employed by the Lord and not thinking of employment as just the place where you get a paycheck. A very powerful point.

Blessings!
02/02/12
Powerful message and well written. God Bless~
02/02/12
Lots of information in this to ponder on. I too liked the analogy that we are employed by the Lord but not to receive a paycheck. God bless!
02/04/12
This is a very interesting piece and it spoke to me in ways I am at a loss for words to describe.

I feel like this is a piece meant for a larger word count, with so many thoughts to consider I felt myself wanting to explore the issues with greater detail, but such is the nature of these cozy 750 word pieces, always leaving you wanting more.
02/08/12
You grabbed me in the beginning as I could totally relate to not being able to sing.

These are tiny things but they interrupted the flow for me. I stumbled when you didn't write out 3rd after writing first and second. I felt the same way with the abbreviation JW.

I did find what you said quite fascinating and learned some things I didn't know. I'm doing a Bible study called Falling in love with Jesus. It's about being Jesus' bride. Nice message while still covering the topic.