The Official Writing Challenge
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02/02/12
This was a very cute story and well put together. It probably could have benefited from descriptive paragraphs that explained things as they happened in between various moments of dialog but with a word count limit, I know that's tough.

I liked the message a lot and found the Elijah-Elisha twist at the end very amusing. Nicely done.
02/02/12
Very nicely done. I enjoyed the entire story. I loved the Elisha-Elijah ending! Cute! God Bless~
02/02/12
How sweet! Love the old preacher and the Elijah-Elisha connection at the end. God bless!
This was great and very suspenseful. I wish there had been a tad more character development but I understand the word limit makes it difficult to do that. Oh true the message is for each one of us today.