The Official Writing Challenge
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01/28/12
Awwwww! This is so sweet! I love this. A bit heartbreaking to know it's a true story, but it sounds like they have (had?) a great relationship, even if they aren't (weren't?) husband and wife.
02/02/12
Congrats on your HR entry!
God bless~
I love this story. I like the strength of the man's convictions and the sadness they both share because of them. I like the fact that they didn't compromise, though we all wanted him to. I wish you had shown the story playing out rather then telling us, but it is a good story, and it is very well told. Well done!
02/03/12
Almost a sad story to the world, but then God is honored through the man's choices. I love your lines-- "It broke his heart to say. It broke her heart to hear."