The Official Writing Challenge
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01/26/12
Oh yes, the ol' 'log in your own eye' lesson - how many times must each of us learn it?! You'd think they'd get smaller the older we got. This is such a classic example of how we can so easily judge others and completely avoid our own shortcomings. You portrayed the message well; I especially like the line about the rods being slammed into her brain! Well done, this is great.
01/27/12
Excellent job! I really enjoyed this- it also serves as a reminder not to "judge" others, while "humbling the reader." Nicely done.
God Bless~
01/28/12
Such a great lesson and in a setting all of us can identify with. Very well written. Wonderful job!
01/29/12
Humble pie is very nutritious if it's not force-fed! Well-drawn characters, with credible dialogue between and within your characters.
01/29/12
This story is an excellent reminder of how we shouldn't judge others, and usually what we find as fault in others is often something we're guilty of. Good job! God bless!
02/01/12
Poor Rena! I can totally relate, having had to remove one gigantic log just this morning.

Nice message.
Congratulations for placing 6th in level 3!