The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/05
I think you forgot in your last line to use the word 'rains' instead of 'reigns' as the last word. An interesting entry with relevant scriptural quotes.
10/27/05
Interesting title drew me in. I agree about the end--reigns should be rains though. Good variety of presentation.
God bless ya, littlelight
10/31/05
The message rings clearly, though some parts seem missing. The mixture of poetic verse and prose is interesting.