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01/27/12
This was such an amazing story, packed with sentiment, emotions galore - and right on topic.

The decision of the young lady in "trouble" - I pray will be the right one.

A good reminder that no matter what, we are all "human and flesh." But, how wonderful that our Father always has His arms open wide for His children.

Great job. God Bless~
01/27/12
That's a tough decision for a young girl - I hope she makes the right one! Thanks for sharing. God bless!
01/28/12
A hard story, but sadly, an often lived life story for many young girls today. My heart hopes that 'she' chose life.
01/28/12
Moving monologue. I can't help but be reminded by a similar scene from the 80's film "Fame." In that scene there's a gut-wrenching realization at the end that she's pregnant and aborting it, but I like your full expression of her decision making throughout.
01/28/12
I really appreciated this sobering and realistic portayal of the topic. The story was very engaging and you felt so much for this young lady, her confusion and isolation. Her plight grabbed you and made you want to help her.

An excellent piece of writing. Blessings!
Congratulations for placing 7th in level 3!
02/14/12
well written to show the dilemma