The Official Writing Challenge
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01/28/12
Oh, I LOVE this. About half way through, the light came on. You did a great job modernizing this old story.
Yes, I agree with the first commenter. You did a great job modernizing this story and the light came on for me too, about half way through. I loved it.
Great job. This is such a good version of that familiar story! You kept my interest throughout, even when I figured out where you were going. Very well written!