The Official Writing Challenge
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01/27/12
Very nice piece of writing and a wonderful message. I like the contrast that you create and the connections to everyday issues that truly don't matter.

This blessed me. Thanks!
01/27/12
I adore this piece, and the last two lines took my breath away.

01/27/12
Profoundly truthful! Thanks for sharing! God bless!
01/28/12
Excellent entry with a very powerful message. Well done.
01/30/12
Really liked the simplicity of your article. Very thought provoking. Really like the succinct writing as well as the spacing. Well done. Hope you win a ribbon.
01/30/12
This is how this blessed me. From the beginning of life to the end, there is that freedom to believe what we will. All beliefs stem from the heart. Anothers heart can be affected by anothers belief. But unfortunately, not all hearts are where their heavenly treasure should be. This is why you are an ADVANCED. Wonderfully put.
02/03/12
I like it It kept me wondering. like the end made me feel good. thanks for your time to read me poem.