The Official Writing Challenge
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01/27/12
This was a very interesting piece. Reading it through a second time helped me better understand the many things that were going on and appreciate the intricacy of the images you created.

I liked the message of unity in fellowship being based on God's word.
01/27/12
This was interesting on many different levels. But, the one that made the difference was at the conclusion of this well written story. Nice job. God Bless~
01/27/12
Often God's presence is found in the most unlikeliest places, and He speaks to us through unconventional people. I loved this story for it's simplicity. It reminds me of how we sometimes lose track of God while we build cathedrals and fine houses of worship, yet exclude His presence. God bless!
01/29/12
Loved the visual detail. I could clearly picture the scene (and it made me grin).

Fantastic message.
Oh Wow! How well written. I could really see it. I could picture everything. I loved the conclusion. Wonderful Story.