The Official Writing Challenge
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01/20/12
I especially loved your cute ending on this story!
01/21/12
I did get confused because you did get your characters mixed up. It started off as Bob that fell, but by the end it was Ken. But getting past that, it was a very amusing story and I enjoyed it.
Awesome.
01/25/12
Not very many people have the luxury, when caught in a royal embarrassment,of having the opportunity to spending years overseas, far from the sight of our humiliation. This was beyond cute! Reading your story outloud before sending it will help you keep up with your characters. Loved this!