The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this clever spiritual allegory... especially the ending, with the continued denial. Very understated, almost easy to miss the spiritual undertones of this story. But I liked it.
10/26/05
Very thought-provoking...a story to return to. Thanks for writing this.
Is Lynn feeling guilty for what she had done?
Facinating story... I think Jesse was Jesus. Am I right?
10/30/05
I had to read the comments to understand your piece. Once I did understand the meaning, I loved the concept but think maybe it would be better if it was clarified a bit more for the reader. Even just a sentence or two after "I think you know the answer to that," going into a little detail about her "break-up" with Jesus would help make it a little more clear.
Just my opinion. But a creative entry nonetheless.
Blessings, Lynda