The Official Writing Challenge
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01/20/12
Good, descriptive writing - you made me smile!
01/20/12
Wow, what a great read. I have never had a panic attack, but I felt I could feel some of the pain of it from your story. I love your cure at the end; it is the same cure that conquers all of our ills. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Well Done.
01/23/12
A great ending - the Lord will carry us when we ask. Very descriptive portrayal of trying to overcome a weakness, but needing Him to do it.