The Official Writing Challenge
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01/19/12
This is so cute! I've never been able to write prose, and I so appreciate those who have that gift. Loved the story, and the "a-moo-sing" pun just cracked me up.

Well done--you made my heart smile!
01/20/12
This was indeed a-moo-sing. What a humorous take on the Serpentís roll in the garden and his punishment. Very clever. Hmm...now wonder if God will let us see that tape for entertainment when we get to Heaven. LOL
01/23/12
Great take on the fallen snake. Really,really good.
This is super clever and very amusing, Congratulations for ranking 7th in Masters and 14th overall!