The Official Writing Challenge
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An excellent piece that speaks to the heart through the eyes of Simon Peter. Good job!
I really liked this!

What a fresh perspective on Peter's mindset as he warms himself by the fire that way when he denied the Lord. I enjoyed the honest and very realistic look at his humanity.

Very thought provoking and well written. Very nice work!
Nice job of bringing Peter's shame to account. Well written and powerfully executed. God Bless~
I really like this piece. All the internal conflict keeps the piece moving forward. I hope you save and pull it out again and flesh it out even more as I think you have the bones of a real winner here, too bad we only get a week for submitting these challenges.
Such a well written poem of Peter’s inner dialog that night, shows how his thoughts shifted from embarrassment to shame. Excellent job.
A sensitive window into Peter's thinking, in a place where few of us would act differently - if we were Peter.
Beautiful job of putting Peter's story into a poem. You did an outstanding job slipping this topic in at so many levels.
I love it when a piece makes Bible character so alive. Well written! Good job! God bless!