The Official Writing Challenge
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01/13/12
Powerful dialogue here. I could feel her slowly letting her guard down.
01/13/12
Oh, this was good. I liked the story and I liked the ending. Good job!
God Bless~
01/14/12
Wow, you nailed that. Straight to the cross.
01/19/12
This was fast moving and realistic to someone who's been there! (Hope I didn't stink though!)