The Official Writing Challenge
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01/12/12
I enjoyed this story, it held a powerful message...The ending had me rooting for the "stray" to return. Nicely done.
God Bless~
01/13/12
Following our instincts may not always make sense but it's usually the Holy Spirit nudging us to action. I found your story full of encouragement for those considered as strays. Everyone needs a friend. Nice job.
Beautifully written. I was drawn into the conversation as if I were there. I even felt the twinge in my heart at the end. Even though there is commitment, misunderstanding is not far off.

01/15/12
Poor Jamie...she was so used to no one being committed to her, it was hard for her to trust…and then when she did, that fragile trust had to be shaken by someone’s lack of faith. This was very realistic, I found myself hoping Mike could convince Jamie to trust again. Well done!
01/17/12
This made me sad at the end, but hopeful too. I can imagine it all working out beautifully due to the commitment involved.