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01/12/12
Awwwww! So sweet, and so beautiful-it brought tears to my eyes. Lovely poem, flowed well, and right on target with the topic of commitment! I loved it.
God Bless~
01/13/12
You have a way with words, for sure. I enjoyed your poem very much. You describe the stages of life with such relevance. I'm going to share this with our marriage group once it is released. Thanks for brightening my day.
Nice rhythm, excellently written.
01/14/12
Beautiful poem of a truly committed marriage. I hope you shared this lovely piece with your mate! Thoroughly enjoyed the read!
This is so beautiful. Congratulations for ranking 11th in Masters and 17th overall.
01/26/12
This is so beautiful. A marriage like you have described is indeed a true treasure. It is perhaps a rare gift in our modern society. I know your dear wife will treasure this poem with all her heart. May God bless you for sharing your lovely poetry with us. Linda