The Official Writing Challenge
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01/12/12
Beautifully written, tender dialogue between grandpa and his grandson. I really liked this, thank you.
God Bless~
01/13/12
A lovely story that touched my heart. You made tears appear as I read the ending. Good work.
01/14/12
What a touching story! I love grandpa’s double commitment day! Great read!
So many commitments in one tenderly written story.

Great writing!!!
01/22/12
This is really lovely, a great read, and touches the heart. As always, your descriptions are fantastic! What an amazing thought - to give your life to the Lord on your wedding day. No better start to a marriage than that! Thanks Beth.