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01/12/12
This story warms my heart (and makes it ache at the same time), especially knowing it's based on a true story. Great job expressing your characters and setting. I felt like I was there, and that these people were my friends, or at least that I wanted them to be.
01/12/12
Fantastic story - it moved me beyond words, and it pulled at my heart strings.
It didn't surprise me that it was based on a true story...they are always the best. Truth - powerful.
God Bless~

01/13/12
I like the way Luke found a way to honor double commitments, not casting aside one for the other. Great story!
01/14/12
Nicely paced story. Love the phrase the diplomat and the nanny. Hope these two make it. You'll have to keep us posted!
Great story! I love the last sentence. How sweet!