The Official Writing Challenge
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01/12/12
Great job of showing the character's inner conflict! Also great job of playing the conflict through to resolution. The committment of Christ is clearly seen. Good job.
01/12/12
Strong storytelling of emotions and angst. The ending is spot on.
01/13/12
Beautifully written, moving and inspiring. Great ending! God Bless~
01/15/12
I love the struggle portrayed here between the MC's "I can't" and the Lord's "I will." The piece flows beautifully from beginning to end.
01/18/12
Wonderfully written! We can't but God can. Loved the ending! God bless!
01/19/12
Congratulations! Well done! Your article made my heart smile! Write on----
01/19/12
An excellent piece with a message of hope. Congratulation on your winning a first at your level!
01/19/12
Congratulations on a job well done! God Bless~
01/19/12
Congratulations on your first place finish -- a job well done!
01/19/12
Congratulations Brenda! Well done!
01/19/12
I love this piece, it has all the elements of a well thought out great piece of writing. The end is amazing - wonderful! Toni Babcock
01/24/12
Brenda, I love this message of hope so beautifully written. Super congrats on your Editor's Choice award!