The Official Writing Challenge
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01/12/12
This was beautiful and meaningful...nicely done.
God Bless~
01/12/12
This pulled at my heartstrings for all the orphans of the world. We can only pray that someone like your MC is caring for them and teaching them about their heavenly Father. Nicely done.
01/13/12
We are all orphans of this world, waiting to someday go home to our loving Father. The one who has committed to us, beginning to end of this life, and then beyond, forever. Great poem!
01/13/12
I enjoyed your article yet found the long sentences distracting.
This was a nice piece, but I was looking for more punctuation throughout.
01/19/12
Congrats on your HR win! God Bless~
I love thi! Not only the meaning and emotions behind it all but the way you laid it out just kept pulling me onward and forward. I found myself holding my breath as I read. Well done, my friend.
My husband grew up in an orphanage from age 4-18 so I strikes close to home.