The Official Writing Challenge
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01/12/12
This was beautifully written, and clearly on topic. I loved the thoughts of the MC as she spoke to the Lord.

It was very clever to have used the dog's behavior as a seque each time to what truly matters in life, which is our "Devotion" to God.

This was fresh, and held my attention throughout- I enjoyed it so much. Thank you. God Bless~
01/12/12
This was written in a thought-provoking way which left me examining my conscience. This fit the topic perfectly and was an enjoyable read.
01/13/12
The correlation of relationships - you and the dog - you and God - is a powerful message. Enjoyed reading your story.
I absolutely loved this devotion!!!
Kudos to your writing talent!
01/21/12
Beautifully done. Convicting.