The Official Writing Challenge
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Awww, this is such a beautiful story. I really enjoyed it, and the topic was clearly there throughout.

I felt like I was sitting there witnessing the entire scene. Nice job of depicting the struggle while the MC was remembering his commitment to his future bride. Nicely done!
God Bless~
I enjoyed this for many reasons: great message of how relationships should function-- loved how Jesus was there with the MC and that the MC recognized that fact--the flow was paced just right--and it had a happy ending. Yes, I'm a sucker for a romantic read anytime. Good job!
Well told story of the ancient battle of commitment to another, versus selfishness. I am so glad it had a happy ending and commitment won! Great job, Great read!
Delightful story. Good Writing!!
I loved the fact that I never left your doorstep yet was riveted all the way through. Great writing!