The Official Writing Challenge
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12/29/11
Excellent choice of many power words! Electrifying and enjoyable. Fast pace, absolutely, no lingering and right to the magnetic energy. I enjoyed. Very much. No falling asleep.
12/30/11
Nice job with this one.

I had a bit of trouble following this, but that may just be me. :)

I liked the alliteration.
12/30/11
Love short direct powerful entries, and this was all of that and more. Great job. Thanks! God Bless~
This is really intense. You said quite a bit with few words.
01/04/12
This poem is interesting. Almost too much alliteration to get a clear picture...but then again, the alliteration throughout really keeps this moving at a fast pace, like thoughts would flash through a mind and like a virus spreads...so very interesting presentation. I enjoyed the read.