The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, I love this. So creative. I think if we knew who'd be in heaven we'd be surprised in more than one case!
Wow - this was so good! I read it three times. Nice job...Thanks. God Bless~
You really captured the essence of what people do when they try to "play God." I love how you ended it with God telling the MC to go and witness to the very man that he didn't want to spend eternity with.

Very creative and well-written take on the topic!
This is so good. I had goosebumps in the end. The last line of the first stanza was difficult for me. I wonder if the 's was a typo. You did a great job of being on topic but presenting it in a fresh and interesting way.
I loved this! Great read! I too love that the MC himself was to be the salesman's witness. Cute read but with a powerful message! Well done!
She's my buddy :-)

Well done Mel, I new this was a good one. Well done.
COngratulations! God Bless~
Congratulations! This was one of my favorites for this topic, so I'm glad you placed. :) Very well done! I adore the flow of the poem and the message it sends. ;)
Perfect rhyme and rhythm and a very much needed message for anyone carrying a grudge. Congratulations on the win.
Congratulations on first place win! Love your piece, well done, well done!
This was stunning! Thank God that God won't let us play God! Awesome!
Congratulations! Loved this piece. Well done.
Oooh! I love a happy ending! Congratulations on your 1st place win!
I just read this poem and I love it. Humorous with a good message. Well done!