The Official Writing Challenge
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12/29/11
Oh, I like this. A great way to illustrate how we can go overboard in sharing our message.
12/29/11
I liked the idea behind this story and I how it took a twist at the end to show how we can go too far. However, I found it a little unconvincing that the journalist interviewing the ex-employee turns out to know her boss. Maybe if some mention would have been made about that earlier on.

Other than that, it was a nice story and held my attention. :)
12/30/11
Good story and nice twist with knowing the boss. I really liked this. Thanks.
God Bless~
Love, love love this! the ending took me by surprise and that doesn't happen very often. This is such a great message that everyone needs to hear.
01/04/12
Great read! Lots of food for thought here! Well written!
01/05/12
Congratulations - God Bless~
01/05/12
Congratulations - God Bless~
01/05/12
Whoa! Nice twist at the end. It leaves the reader with the message that we should be careful with how we "witness," and be discerning on what truly makes a difference and what just causes trouble.

Congrats on your Highly Commended piece!