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12/29/11
The message and the rhythm make this a very special piece. I can almost hear the accompaniment drumming out the beat of this narrative. So well done! Congratulations.
12/30/11
Oh, very good.

A few lines didn't fit for me with the rhythm of the rest of the poem, but that may just be me. :)

I loved the last part, especially.
12/30/11
I simply loved this! Nothing more to add - great job, beautiful powerful ending. God Bless~
01/02/12
Perfect! I love how you used the metaphor of Satan as a hacker into our soul, and how Jesus "erases" our sins. Very nice!
This is beautiful. My favorite part is not stolen identity but freely given. You said so much with these words.
01/04/12
Great poem, so well done!
Congratulations!
01/05/12
Congratulations! God Bless~
01/05/12
Congratulations! I love the direction you took this poem.