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12/29/11
The message and the rhythm make this a very special piece. I can almost hear the accompaniment drumming out the beat of this narrative. So well done! Congratulations.
12/30/11
Oh, very good.

A few lines didn't fit for me with the rhythm of the rest of the poem, but that may just be me. :)

I loved the last part, especially.
12/30/11
I simply loved this! Nothing more to add - great job, beautiful powerful ending. God Bless~
01/02/12
Perfect! I love how you used the metaphor of Satan as a hacker into our soul, and how Jesus "erases" our sins. Very nice!
01/04/12
This is beautiful. My favorite part is not stolen identity but freely given. You said so much with these words.
01/04/12
Great poem, so well done!
01/05/12
Congratulations!
01/05/12
Congratulations! God Bless~
01/05/12
Congratulations! I love the direction you took this poem.