The Official Writing Challenge
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12/29/11
Great job with this entry. I really enjoyed it and it was creative in how you presented it overall.
I liked it! God Bless~
12/30/11
Very creative!

I felt this may have needed a better set up and maybe some background information. I had a bit of trouble following what what happening. Were Mrs. A and Mr. P (or was it the other way around?) real people, or something in the computer?

I liked the end with the computer sneezing. :)
12/30/11
I laughed out loud at the line, "Then how should I scare you?" :) This was a very creative and fun. Thanks and blessings!
Outstanding! I loved your alliteration. The scenes were so vivid and you made me chuckle several times. Loved it!
01/04/12
Very creative, terrific read and entry!