The Official Writing Challenge
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Very interesting way of presenting the topic. Nice job...Christ is the way, and only way! Amen.

God Bless~
Oh wow. What an interesting way to depict the rapture. It makes me wonder if there will be any "cyber warnings."
Wonderfully creative take on the topic. You did a great job with this.
I think you did a great job with this story. When I was a kid and the TV would go blank for a minute, I'd panic, thinking I had been left behind.

Small red ink- you forgot an end quote near the middle.

This is a great story and a fresh take on the topic. I love the reminder to be ready.
Love how you were able to take the challenge topic and bring a message of “the Rapture” with it! Terrific job!
Congratulations! God Bless~
THIS is sure 'nuff awesome with a capitol "A" and that stands for award! ;)

Loved the creative metaphors and fun characters. You kept me riveted to the end, and I did not see that ending coming at all! BIG congrats on your placing!