The Official Writing Challenge
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12/29/11
Very nicely done. Powerfully written. I really felt strong emotions with this entry. Good job!
God Bless~
12/30/11
Oh, this is good. Creative. I liked the connection between the virus and the computer virus. I'm glad the MCs son came home. :)
01/04/12
I too appreciated the happy ending. Well done.
This is a sweet story. I enjoyed the analogy. The ending was tied up too neatly for me. What made him sorry and what changed his mind? I enjoyed the characters and could picture the scene unfolding.
01/04/12
Great job weaving the two different viruses into one entertaining and meaningful story! Well done!