The Official Writing Challenge
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12/15/11
This was an interesting read and sad at the same time. It held the ring of truth throughout, so I was not surprised at the ending when it informed the readers it was based on a true story.

Nicely done - thank you.
God Bless~
This is a good poem with a strong message. Excellent job.
I think your message could be even more powerful if you added just a bit more imagery and/or poetical elements. Even still, though, I really think you hit the nail on the head. Parents need to heed this message.