The Official Writing Challenge
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12/15/11
Awww - this was a beautiful entry. Well written and held my attention fully.

It was sad that Jose was gone - but how wonderful knowing that the two friends would be reunited one day in the Kingdom of our Lord.

I loved that the MC said, "tonight he dines with Christ." That was a beautiful way of bringing this very strong story to an end.

Thank you for this.
God Bless~

12/27/11
Good read! Love the piece, good job! It was a bit difficult TO read because of the tight structure,though.

Before you post your submissions, re-do your paragraph divisions. Changing to plain text for, the 'submission window' always removes them.

Once the submission is in the window, it's tedious, but you can go back through and put in the paragraph indent again. Again, love the story!