The Official Writing Challenge
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12/15/11
This was compelling and interesting at once. I felt the pain of the young man who self isolated on the computer...However, I was happy to see that he was speaking to a Pastor, trying to get help.

Good job. Thanks. God Bless~
Wow, I love the way this story was written. Kept me compelled the whole time. Thanks for the awesome read.
12/16/11
I must admit, it took reading this a couple of times to get a grasp on what was going on. I'm still not sure I understand what was happening, but I did appreciate the surprise ending. Very creative.
12/29/11
Nicely done! Congrats on your HR standing. God Bless~