The Official Writing Challenge
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12/15/11
Hmmm nice poem.
12/16/11
Interesting poem. Though I'd personally prefer to think there are more jewels out there than trash. The view of this poem is very well written.
I really enjoyed this message in verse.
12/29/11
Congrats on your HR standing, nicely done!
God Bless~
12/29/11
It truly is amazing how we can find jewels of wisdom in unlikely places. Well-stated.

Congrats on your Editor's Choice, Benjamin!
This one needs to be read slowly and several times to savour its depths. Congratulations!
I enjoyed this poem. I especially liked the first stanza... "Craving glory, Or a bit of fame, Or at least a passing glance..." Nicely phrased. The rest is also quite good. You make good use of key words in your descriptions. Well done!