The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, how creative! I enjoyed reading this. Kept my attention the whole way through. I couldn't wait to figure what it was all about. Awesome ending.
This was like reading a Sci-Fi novel. Good job and a unique way of using the topic. I enjoyed it. God bless~
True creativity at work here. Great job!
Well done and very imaginative; the extended pun was fun to read. A note, be careful of overusing exclamation points.
This certainly is a creative use of the topic. I confess to being confused all the way through to the last line when it all fell into place,so it kept my attention focused! Well done!
I loved this read. You have a great imagination. It is so futuristic -- or is it?
Highly creative! I had to laugh at the "angry pigs" as opposed to "angry birds." I seriously don't see what all the fuss is over that game. ;)

Cool take on the social network topic. Nice job with the 666BOX.
This was so wonderful and so much fun to read! So many things about it ... creative, well written, it held my interest all the way through.

I could see this as a SCI-FI novel series. And in it all, there was a solid gospel message too.

Excellent job!
I so rarely see good Sci-Fi submissions; love this! Good job, I kept reading to figure out what on earth was going on.