The Official Writing Challenge
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12/02/11
This is definitely on topic and very creative. My first thought was you can't change the words of the Bible! But then I realized if that were true, I would have never understood the Bible. Your translation is great, funny, and something many can relate to.
12/02/11
Now this is a unique take on topic with a powerful message packed in it. I love the rendition of a prayer in computereeze (if I spelled that right). Great job!
12/03/11
"And permanently delete all our corrupted files" - genius. Absolutely loved it from start to finish.
12/03/11
Very inventive take on the topic! I enjoyed it. :)
12/03/11
Creative and fun!
12/11/11
This was a clever entry and well written - with a powerful ending. Thanks, I really enjoyed it...God Bless~
12/15/11
Such a well deserved win, this is terrific, loved it!
12/16/11
Congrats on your win.
God Bless~
12/27/11
This is great; I was chuckling from the start through the end! You made my heart smile--good job! Congratulations on your win!
12/31/11
Second place Master's level! Woo hoo! I wonder what words Jesus would have prayed exactly in our day and age when He taught His disciples (and us) how to pray? Love it.