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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Download/Upload (11/17/11)

TITLE: Upload Complete
By Allison Egley
11/30/11


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Starting Operation System: Creative
*Open Internet Fox*

Browse files
Upload file: Earth
Upload complete.

Upload file: Mankind
Upload complete.
**System Warning!** The file "Mankind" has been corrupted. Would you like to restart? Allow me to restart later on my own

Save: Noah and family

*System Restart*

Upload file: Worldwide flood
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Upload file: Rainbow Covenant
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Upload file: Israelites
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Upload file: Slavery in Egypt
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**System Warning!** The file "Promised Land" could not be uploaded at this time. Would you like to try again? No

Upload file: Desert Wanderings
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**System Warning!** The file "Desert Wanderings" is taking an unusually long time to load. Would you still like to complete this upload? Yes

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**System Warning!** The file "Promised Land" has been infected with a Trojan Horse. Would you like to try to fix this file? Yes

Upload file: Judges and Kings
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Upload file: Prophesies
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*System Warning!* The file "Prophesies" has been uploaded, but not all needed components to run the program have been fulfilled. Would you like to continue? Yes

Upload file: 400 Years
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*System Upgrade in Progress*
*System Upgrade complete*


Upload file: Mary and Joseph
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Upload file Shepherds
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Upload file: A Multitude of Heavenly Hosts
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**System Warning!** The file "Shepherds" is not responding. Would you like to wait to see if it responds? Yes

Upload file: Star
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Upload file: Magi
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Upload file: Messiah
**System Warning!** Uploading the file "Messiah" will also fulfill the needed requirements to make the file "Prophesies" fully operational. Would you like to continue?

YES!

Upload complete



Isaiah 9:6 (NKJV)
For unto us a Child is born,
Unto us a Son is given;
And the government will be upon His shoulder.
And His name will be called
Wonderful, Counselor, Mighty God,
Everlasting Father, Prince of Peace.


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Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 12/02/11
This is definitely a creative take on the title. For me personally, it was a little hard to follow because I'm more of a traditionalist but I think many people will chuckle and I appreciate your effort. It is definitely an out of the box entry.
Kristine Baker12/03/11
I truly felt like I was sitting in front of a computer and reading Bible Cliff Notes. This was very creative.
Kelvin Fowler12/10/11
Fantastic, cannot help but think that 'Messiah' should have been a download though, the Kingdom intersecting earth.

But fantastic and unconventional. Well done.
CD Swanson 12/11/11
This was different and an entirely unusual entry. Thanks. God Bless~
Glynis Becker 12/15/11
Such a well-deserved win for a really creative piece!!
Beth LaBuff 12/15/11
Allison, I LOVE this. Your creativity and message are superb. Congratulations on your 1st place EC for this amazing entry.
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 12/15/11
Congratulations! It's funny how things work because when I read it now it really had an impact on me. It's cord how the Holy Spirit does things like that :)
Chely Roach12/15/11
What a fantastically creative piece, Allison! Congratulations on the big ol' 1st place win! Well done!
Linda Goergen12/15/11
Congratulations on your well deserved first place win! This entry was terrific, so creative, great job!
CD Swanson 12/16/11
Congratulations on your well deserved win! God Bless~
Bonnie Bowden12/24/11
Very original and fun. Congratulations on your 1st place win!
annie keys12/27/11
Love this! What a great style---and the ending is just fabulous! Good job; well done!
Patricia Turner12/28/11
Allison I was thrilled to see your name at the top of the list! Your creativity on this is wonderful. I felt the anticipation growing as I approached the final "upload". A huge, well deserved CONGRATULATIONS!
Nancy Sullivan 12/30/11
Congratulations on a very deserved 1st place. Living in anticipation of that final upload when we "Shall
Behold Him, Face to Face."
Great job!
Clyde Blakely 12/30/11
Wonderful! I's anxiously waiting for the final "Upload"!
Seema Bagai 07/01/12
Congrats, BoB!!
Lynda Lee Schab 07/01/12
Winner of Best of the Best: UPLOAD COMPLETE!

Congratulations, Allison! This is a wonderfully creative piece, so deserving of the win!
Helen Curtis07/01/12
Brilliant and so deserving of the Best of the Best 2012 award!!!

This is so simple and easy to understand, and yet so incredibly profound and powerful. You have summed up the Old and New Testaments, and the way they tie in, so incredibly well.

Congratulations, and enjoy your wonderful moment of achievement and recognition.

Blessings, Helen
Joanne Sher 07/01/12
So VERY deserving - UBER creative and PERFECT for the topic - and SOOOO cool! A HUGE congrats, Ms. BoB! :)
Michael Edwards 07/01/12
Congratulations Allison, Very unique and creative. Loved it! This is a tough competition to win. We know there was a lot of hard work involved.

God Bless, Mike & Bea Edwards
Glynis Becker 07/01/12
Allison! So excited to see your win with this fantastic piece! Congratulations!!
Shari Armstrong 07/01/12
Congrats on the BoB!!!! Awesome!!!
Ifeoma Dennis07/01/12
Wow!!! So awed for words that I can only WOW!
Winner Upload Well-Deserved!
Danielle King 07/01/12
Congratulations Allison. This is a brilliant piece of work and definitely deserving a BoB 1st place! So happy for you.
Jim McWhinnie 07/01/12
Yea, Allison! I loved this creative and imaginative piece. Loved it !

jim mcwhinnie
Lillian Rhoades 07/01/12
Allison, to have won the BOB with an article on a subject that many found difficult makes your win even more laudable.

So glad for you!
Betty Castleberry07/01/12
Unique. Very unique. Did I say unique? Congrats on your BoB win!
Beth LaBuff 07/01/12
Allison, Hearty congratulations for Best of the Best! Your creativity is amazing here. Enjoy your crown and the year ahead!
Amy Michelle Wiley 07/01/12
Hehe, love the creativity. Congrats!
Sarah Elisabeth 07/02/12
Wow, this was something not to be missed! Incredible, loved the creativity from first sentence to the "completion." Well deserved, Allison, congrats on you BoB!!!
CD Swanson 07/09/12
Congratulations on a well deserved win! I am so happy for you. God Bless you~
Maurice Armstrong09/24/12
Such Creative excellence. I know who your father.
C. Roxanna Tineo10/31/12
This was very interesting to read. It is so different from anything I have ever read. I want to share it with my husband who is in IT, he will appreciate it. Congratulations!!! Best wishes to you for continued writing success.
Bonnie Bowden01/06/13
Very unique and thought provoking. Congratulations on your 1st place award.
Emily Gillilan02/05/13
This is awesome. My kind of poetry! You rock : ) I've never seen any Christian entry that fit so much with new styles of poetry. But this one does. Congratulations on the win!
Emeka Buffong03/08/13
This was very original. I found it to be both refreshing and profound. Keep allowing God to use you.
elaine vanpoole 04/26/13
This poem? was a very creative way of putting the Bible in a "quick format" using pc language. I thought it was very cute and funny. Today's generation should be able to relate to it very well.
Linda Berg06/26/13
What a clever "out of the box" but timely piece. This was creatively done with a beautiful ending.
Don V. Standeford 06/23/14
Incredible!