The Official Writing Challenge
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12/02/11
Love the poetic prose in this piece, especially little jewels like, "As night gathered up its shadows".

I also enjoyed the refelections on past, present, and future.

Lovely application of the theme.
This is so lovely. Once I figured out who all of the characters were, I was eager to keep reading. It is so true that things like divorce can have a huge impact on all of the family. Your ending was perfect.
Although I had to reread who the characters were, I liked the message of strolling down memory lane via the downloaded photos.

This was a nice story.
How often, like Job, we have to wait until after our trials to "come forth as gold." A lovely, heart tugging story. Blessings.
12/11/11
This was beautiful and heart warming - thank you for this entry. God Bless~