The Official Writing Challenge
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12/02/11
This article is something that anyone who has ever had a weight problem can relate to. Desire and frustration wage a fierce battle in our minds. The humor in the article lightens it up but will never conquer the problem. Godd and clever writing!
This is so funny. I was chuckling throughout. I think you might have been weakest on Topic. The beginning drew me right in. I wasn't able to easily predict where you were going. The ending was great. Thank you for the giggles.
12/11/11
Thank you for this entry. It was light-hearted, no pun intended...And, I thought you did a good job it was a fun read. God Bless~