The Official Writing Challenge
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12/02/11
You've got a lot of word pictures and a lot going on here. An interesting story, not sure I quite understand all of it, but it was a fun read.
12/07/11
Interesting take on the topic. This was fun and the "chaos" of emotions was very apparent. It was good the MC walked off to speak with Jesus.

Loved this part:

"I’m here for a purpose; to upload a prayer to Jesus … then wait a while, knowing that He’ll download sufficient grace for me to go back indoors and eat humble pie!"

All of us at some point in our life will have to make concessions and have a heaping portion of "humble pie." When digested it really it a worthy treat!

Liked it...God Bless~



12/13/11
This was so very enjoyable. What impressed me most is how much you accomplished in creating so many word pictures in such a relatively short piece. You got so much done.

Thanks for writing this ... and sharing it too!
12/14/11
Absolutely to the point! Upload our prayers and download His grace. Nicely written and an interesting read.
Congratulations for ranking 6th in your level and 14th overall!