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12/02/11
You packed a powerful message in this story. That part about humans being predictable "ad nauseatum" really hits home. Why would we want to be predictable to the enemy? But yes, Jesus did defeat him, in a move that was totally unpredicted. Amen and amen.
12/03/11
The only problem is you made these characters so loveable, I have a hard time hating them!

But seriously, I enjoyed this perspective, very much.

I probably would have left off the last tag, to give the reader a chance to come to the same conclusion.
12/07/11
Nice job with this. Clever use of the topic. Good message - Jesus is amazing and will always prevail. Amen.
God bless~
12/14/11
An interesting approach to getting across the message and the use of 1 John 4:18. Nicely written!
12/16/11
Congratulations for ranking 7th in your level and 15th overall!