The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed this. You went in the exact opposite direction than what I was expecting. The Bible verse really supports your message.

The only red ink I can offer is that some of the phrases didn't seem to fit with the voice of your story. I'm not quite sure that I'm able to explain exactly what I mean. An example would be--

the adorable quirky smile staring back at us as crooked as a lopsided crescent moon

That sentence just didn't flow as smoothly as other sentences did.

The message is wonderful and is so pertinent to the world today.
Excellent writing! It fits the subject matter so well yet manages to convey a message that all of us could benefit from. I'm a grandma also and I don't believe the temptations to sin were so great in the years when we were growing up. Our modern technology has brought about too much leisure time in which to indulge ourselves. My mother used to say,"idle hands are the devil's workshop." She kept me busy doing chores and providing me with lots of good books to read.
12/11/11
Great job and great meaningful message...Thanks! I loved this. God Bless you~
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