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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Download/Upload (11/17/11)

TITLE: Pixel Perfect
By Yvonne Blake
11/30/11


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Block by block
Scene by scene
Each day a pixel
Mosaic laid

One by one
Day by day
Each one different
Not the same.

Beat by beat
Breath by breath
A life created
Life begun

Coo by coo
Cry by cry
Designed by God
A child born

Word by word
Step by step
Mind discovers
Muscles grow

Tick by tick
Tock by tock
Divine downloading
Photoshop

Friend by friend
Year by year
Mistakes are made
Lessons learned

Job by job
Hour by hour
A penny earned
Dollar spent

Hug by hug
Kiss by kiss
Homes established
Promised vows

Day by day
Shade by shade
Sometimes brilliant
Sometimes gray

Side by side
Square by square
Viewed too close
Unfocused, blurred

Trial by trial
Joy by joy
Life is marching
Passing fast

Day by day
Prayer by prayer
Meeting neighbors
Seeking souls

Week by week
Song by song
Submissive heart
Humble heart

Year by year
Line by line
Wood, hay, stubble
Silver, gold

One by one
Pixel by pixel
The final picture
Masterpiece


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Benjamin Graber12/01/11
Wow. This is...perfect!
Linda Goergen12/02/11
I love this poem! God “downloading” every tiny pixel of our life, beginning to end, all to be “uploaded” and shone to us one day when we will see things in the picture we never saw before. Just a terrific job on this poem!
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 12/02/11
This is positively divine. It gave me goosebumps. At first, I wasn't sure it was going to nail the topic, but the more I think on it, the more I believe it was right on topic.
Kelvin Fowler12/10/11
Yeah this is my pick so far, well done, loved the flow.
CD Swanson 12/11/11
Simply beautiful! I loved this and everything about it. It flowed nicely, the message powerful and it was on topic. Great job. Thanks for this lovely entry.
God Bless~
Verna Cole Mitchell 12/13/11
I love the simplicity and the beauty of this poem.
Benjamin Graber12/15/11
Congratulations on 5th place, Yvonne! You deserved it!
CD Swanson 12/16/11
Congrats on your HR placing. This was so good!
God Bless~