The Official Writing Challenge
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12/07/11
Nicely done. This short piece was clever and honest in what is happening in our world. There is truth to what was written-we need to be mindful of what we "download and upload."

Good point of "circumstances" affect some directly and other non directly, however as a "whole" we should be aware at all times.

I enjoyed this and can hardly believe I am the first to comment.

Blessings~
12/10/11
Oh, I really enjoyed this piece. It flowed smoothly, and so succinctly you said what you needed to say (which, by the way, drove your point in deep).

Loved the message. Nice opening paragraph. Fantastic closing paragraph.
12/14/11
Much truth about what you say in your writing. We certainly need to filter what we read and what we send to others to read. Thanks for sharing this.