The Official Writing Challenge
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12/02/11
I really like this story; great take on topic and quite well written.
12/04/11
This story was interesting and made me want to read on, although I didn't understand all the first paragraph; maybe because I'm not up on techno stuff.

It was creative and fit the topic well and flowed to a satisfying ending, albeit a body bag! Good job.
12/07/11
Interesting and not your typical ending- great job. I enjoyed this clever piece. God bless~
I have to admit, I was getting worried about the MC, all that discomfort! But you knew where you (and he) were going! Nice job.
12/14/11
Excellent story and plot. Thankfully, the MC received the Lord before he went home to meet his Creator. Your unique approach on the topic makes this story an exceptionally good read.
12/15/11
Congratulations on placing 2nd Annie. Well deserved!
12/15/11
Congratulations on your second place win!
12/16/11
congrats on your win. God bless~
12/30/11
Such a powerful and well-written entry, Annie. Congratulations on a well-deserved 2nd place. God Bless.