The Official Writing Challenge
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11/17/11
This was quite detailed...It seems a lot of thought and imagination went into this.

Interesting and a different take on the topic. God Bless~
This is a creative take on the topic. I felt like I was listening to a real commercial.

My only thought might be that that many Bible verses might be overwhelming for your intended audience. I appreciate all the thought and time it took to find these awesome verses but I fear an unbeliever might skip over some of it.

You definitely covered the topic in a fresh way. I love your message and the truth in it is what helps me get through the tough days. Nice job.
11/22/11
Loved this! Creative and with a great message! Well written!
12/01/11
Congratulations. God bless~
12/01/11
Wow, this is off the charts as far as creativity. Nice work. Congrats on your EC and ribbon!