The Official Writing Challenge
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This was good and so true.

Nicely done. God Bless~
This is great. You did a great hob of covering this difficult topic. You had me laughing out loud at many points. I LOVE the last line!
Oh, yes I laughed and laughed. From the second paragraph on, I was rolling.

At first, I wasn't sure what about the first paragraph made me stall, ever so slightly. I read it again and again, and I think what's happening (at least in my mind) is that the second and third sentences are pulling me away from the story. They can easily be deleted.

But like I said, from the second paragraph on, you had me. The piece flowed and I rolled.

LOVED the last line.
Ha Ha...great ending!
It's sad that often the older generation are the victims hackers and spammers.
This is well written.
Bahahahahahaha! SoooOOOooo loved this article! And the last line---that was just way too perfect! (rolling my eyeballs) Good job!
Nicely done- congratulations!
God Bless~
Great Job! Congratulations on your victory. Awesome read and so very true. Thanks.
Oh my! I am soooo excited to get 1st place in Level 3. At 9:00 AM Arizona time, that sound you heard was me whooping and hollering and doing the happy dance when I saw I got 1st. Very blessed and humbling, for me at least! Thanks so much to everyone for your nice comments, especially the constructive critiques. Love you all!
And another congratulations from me so you can whoop and holler some more. Well done!