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11/17/11
That was funny! I can only imagined how she felt with the "winning numbers gone!"

Nice job! God Bless~
This is a fun read. I enjoyed the irony and the perseverance of taking 3 hours to get rid of unwanted messages. I wonder if the "unavailable" phone call was Publisher's Clearing House!

I did notice at times the tense seemed to change from present to future to perfect progressive forms.

Overall, I think you did a lovely job covering this difficult topic. It is a fun read.
11/17/11
Oh, no! Poor woman. :( I have a pretty powerful spam filter, and I get VERY few, but I have to check the spam folder before I empty it - many legit emails end up there.

Cute story - a little slow in the middle, but I thought it began and ended well, and I could connect with the MC - believe me. :)
11/22/11
Well written, very believable, great detail, I felt like I was sitting right there with her. Oh the agony that the same day she was sent winning numbers that got routed to spam, was the same day she deleted all spam. That would be the exact same kind of luck I would have! LOL Entertaining read!