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11/17/11
This made me laugh out loud. Cute and different take on Spam! Nicely done. God Bless~
This is an interesting take on the topic. I liked how you illustrated your point. The recipe was cute idea but I'm not sure if it fit your story. I enjoyed your humor and you made me giggle.
11/19/11
I enjoyed this piece very much. The conversations flowed nicely, and I seemed to float though the entire piece. I liked the Pigs Feet Jelly recipe at the end. It was so funny, so quirky, and delightfully strange. I could totally see this as an inset to the article in some magazine.

What I had a difficult time with, was agreeing with Em's comparison to Spam. Although I do scan it, I never enjoy it. But, hmmm... on second thought, maybe I do enjoy it, for pure entertainment value--right before I delete it, so yeah, I guess I do get it!
11/25/11
I loved this piece; hush, don't tell anybody---but, I like both spam AND pigs feet jelly. Yeah---so the whole conversation made me feel--like an insider. (giggle)

Good job on all the conversation; well done, I could 'feel' the personalities.

And I really smiled when I saw the recipe at the end. Nice touch--so00, there are at least two of us who like the pigs feet jelly then? *)
This article really touched me. My family moves a lot and a church that I currently attend feels a lot like Maddy. I really appreciate the comparison to a stage setting as well. All front. The end, complete with a recipe, was well done too. Like!
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